There are many things that I don't like about the layout of the article, one being that there's the writing straight down the middle, i prefer it in magazines where it's written in columns like in Vogue and Vanity Fair. I find that the article is also too ridgid and has no flexibility to it, again you wouldn't find this in a magazine like Vogue. However I do like the heading and how well it stands out, I think that works very well for the article. I also like how they've put quotes in boxes throughout the texts it makes the reader read them and it intices them into the article. I didn't like how they have used some of the images, as I feel the last page spread doesn't fit in with the article at all as it has no autumn feeling within it at all, and that last image makes me feel very wintery. Keeping all of my views in mind I then reproduced it which is shown below to how I thought it looked best.
This is my first draft.
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